Showing posts with label Manuscripts in progress. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Manuscripts in progress. Show all posts

Monday, October 14

Blog Tour!

Welcome to my blog!

Thanks to Debbie Nance, http://2weavers.wordpress.com/, my Writing and Illustration for Young Readers friend, for asking me to join. Love ya tons Debbie!


The Questions: 


1. What am I working on right now?

Right now I am working on the final stages of Dressing the Naked Hand: The World's Greatest Guide to Puppets, Puppetry, and Puppeteering. A book for immature audiences--mostly.

As a longtime puppet collector (read as obsessive), and avid watcher of my co-worker and co-author, Mark Pulham's puppet shows, I soon found myself pulled into the world of making and performing with puppets.

It's over 200 full-color pages filled with all the how-to, tips, patterns, and instructions that I looked for (and had a hard time finding) when I was trying to learn puppet-making. There will be instructional video included that entertains as much as it teaches. Sample (rough draft) video can be found here -- this is a private youtube link -- enjoy :)



2. How does it differ from what I’ve written before?

Becoming a non-fiction writer is what first tempted me to consider joining the ranks of the wannabe writers. All those lectures I attended! Seymour Simon, Jim Arnosky. I'd not found Nic Bishop yet, but he inspires me too. Still, I didn't consider myself enough of an expert to write anything.

I did write and design for a scrapbook company for a few years, but soon the lure of writing Picture Books pulled me away from those endeavors. You can't be a librarian in one, if not the largest Children's Library, for 18+ years and not fall in love with picture books. Anyway, a few years later that passion spread into the fever-inducing excitement of writing Speculative YA. I had no idea that writing was more addicting than reading.

A few more years down the road, a local puppet creator, Joe Flores came to me with the idea for writing a book on how to not only make puppets, but performance instruction as well. I brushed off the idea. But he was insistent, firm in the belief I could do it.

I sketched up the ideas, put it all in a binder and took to my brilliant mentor and co-storytelling-fanatic/co-picturebook-conspirator, Rick Walton for his opinion. It just happened that the exuberant, energetic, and visionary Christopher Robbins, from Familius Publishing, happened to be the day's lecturer. Not too long after, we were signed, sealed, and manuscript delivered. (the illustration and photos--well, that's taking a bit longer.)



.3. Why do you write what you do?

Because I seriously think I'm crazy. As in where did all these people come from that inhabit my head?

From trouble-making JJ, the puppet who won't  leave well enough alone; the unfortunate floating Oliver, the in-her-own-world bookworm Philippa, to the darkly dangerous nanite altered Hana, and Denton who happens to have been in the wrong place at the wrong time . . . yikes, and those characters are just the ones I've let out recently. There's still the world-hopping traveler Gabe, the adventures of the Pets and Petersons, and also Cooper Cordova who is forced to deal with the devastating loss of his sister, Rhea, to the war in Afghanistan in the MG novel Letters Home.

oh- oh- Don't forget the future-world mind-twister tragedy that starts with dead bodies falling from the sky. My character is there, and his dog, but alas, he is nameless as yet. He is calling for a name, I just can't give him the power of naming him quite yet.

Yikes. I get lost in the stories--can you tell? On with the answering: For me, each book begins when the characters start talking to me. They are pests. They are relentless. They honestly don't know how to shut up. And if I try to ignore them, refuse to write their words, they tend to circle, 'round and 'round they go. Harpies--the lot of them!

I do eventually give in. But, when I manage to transcribe their conversations, in the hope they will give me some peace--well, it never works. For some reason it only gives them permission to move the conversation forward.

Where do these conversations come from? Where is the control? The brakes? The muzzle! Anyone? Bueller. Bueller?


4. How does your writing process work?

In the beginning . . . --ha ha, couldn't resist (*peek at the excerpt from Dressing the Naked Hand I've included below for the inside joke)

In reality it starts in the middle of the night. Literally. Sometime between 2 and 4 in the a.m. They start talking. I eventually cave and jot down some notes in the dark. But they keep speaking. I write some more. In the dark. It makes for some interesting deciphering come morning ;)

The next day I try to write out the conversation I transcribed during the night. It's always a conversation. Sometimes it's the character talking directly to me. Other times it's a private conversation/argument/discussion between two or more of them.

When I get time to sit and actually write, all I do is connect the dialogue. It's kind of a 'zone out', sit in the scene, feel, smell, listen, taste and let the character/s take over thing.

Eventually I allow my edit brain out of its box to hack and cut, twist and shape the words. I love this part of writing. It doesn't scare me as much as when I allow the characters out to do the discovery writing.


5. Now I have a question for you:

As a librarian for children, I'm sensitive to the disappointment that inevitably follows when a child starts reading an author, falls in love with the characters, and then the silly author pulls a total switch and not only changes up the characters, but changes genre! I do this! It worries me. (I know, why worry if you aren't even published yet--silly writer. It's impossible not to think of it though--again, silly writer. Cart before the horse much?)

Should there not be some kind of warning? Some clue to inform the reader that one of these books is just not the same (woah, channeled Sesame Street there for a moment). What do you think of the authors that add in a middle name for their picture books vs. first and last only for a MG. Or, like famous bestseller Ally Condie vs. her first novels under Allyson Braithwaite Condie. Or, like **Barbara Mertz, no I mean Michaels, no, really I mean her historical mystery dynamo writing of a pseudonym Elizabeth Peters.

I do not have enough middle names. And how do you shorten Amy?

Do weigh in. I'd love to hear a discussion. And, I'd really like to have a bit of a plan in place before Dressing the Naked Hand comes out.

Hmmm, I have a good friend who insists on calling me Indy. I can handle that. Indy . . .  Indie . . . Indi? Like Avi, and it puts me in the middle of the fiction bookshelves, not at the bottom, not at the very end like White does.

Thank you all for joining me in my ramblings. I can't wait to meet even more of you through the course of this blog tour!

Amy White


Look for these authors to post next week:

My PhotoJulie Olsen, picture book author/illustrator, mom, and crossfit junkie! http://jujubeeillustrations.blogspot.com



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Stephanie Kelley, YA writer, insane reader, and former blogger who just couldn't stay away. http://stephik.blogspot.com




My PhotoBruce Luck, a retired teacher now writing children's stories. http://writetimeluck.blogspot.com/




**BONUS**

Check out what I love doing in my free time--Script and Text Analysis

A scientific way to plotting for success. An empirically based system of Text Analysis.
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The last . . .


 ** I'm devastated by Barbara's recent passing. The world has lost another great. Barbara's spunky, bright and oh-so-wonderful Amelia Peabody will ever be one of my favorite characters.


* Excerpt from Dressing the Naked Hand 

In the beginning there was shadow and there was light. And it came to pass that the shadow was separated from the light . . . the light of the evening fire. And early man discovered he could tell stories against illuminated cavern walls. And in that light, were the first puppets created, and they were called good, and man named them Hand Shadows. 

In the following years were the great Shadow Puppets of Indonesia created. Where we find another harmonious partnership of human, Dalang, and puppet, Wayang also known as . . .


DtNH Disclaimer: 

The views held in this work are not necessarily the views held by our editor, production staff or anyone involved in the publication thereof. We are not responsible for damages sustained as a result of misuse of patterns, misunderstanding of ideology and, or malfunctioning equipment. If your puppet does for some reason succeed in what is heretofore called the Pinocchio Paradigm, and succeeds in overtaking not only your workshop, your home, your family and friends--to the point of supplanting and altering your very persona--we will consider you forewarned and sufficiently alerted by way of this notice.


Allow me to explain myself:

I have an issue with putting boring history stuff in a how-to book. But how do you write a book on puppetry if you don't give a nod to all the history that has brought us to this point in time?

In the end, I decided that if my readers were going to actually take the time to read the introduction or history, I was going to reward them. Plus, I like characters. And what is a puppetry book if not a book chock full of character?

Thursday, March 28

I'm so EXCITED!!!

The
PERFECT
conference workshop is now available


The Lab: A Novel Workshop for 
Serious Writers

The Lab: A Novel Workshop for Serious Writers
From Scraps to (manu)Scripts: Conquering the Murky Middles: Rescue those stalled-out novel manuscripts from your computer boneyard and bring them to this new, innovative, paddling-through-the-murky-middles workshop. This is a workshop for our faithful writers who have polished two or three beginning chapters in a WIFYR workshop in the past, but who need help getting the rest of their novel on paper and submission-worthy.

Workshop Goal:  “Finish, Polish, and Submit” is the mantra of this workshop. 
For five days, you will work harder than you have ever worked before (and so will Cheri), you will work smarter than you have ever worked before, and you will experience writing success like you have never experienced before.

Preparing for the Murky Middles Workshop: 
Prior to the conference, students will submit a murky-middles portion of their work (two to three of their murkiest chapters), a brief description of the problems of those two-to-three middle chapters, and a chapter-by-chapter synopsis (two sentences per chapter) of the entire novel, from the first chapter to the last. This is the material you will work with for the five days of WIFYR, so choose wisely.

Workshop Content: 
Each day, Cheri will share a different solution to novel-writing problems including Plot, Conflict, and Pacing; Character Development and Voice; Setting and Description; Scene, Summary, and Dialog; Developing Themes and Introducing Backstory.

Daily Assignments: 
Participants will write and workshop specific scenes that emphasize plot, pacing, character development, moral conflicts, and so forth, in addition to revising their middle chapters and, in some cases, writing new ones.

Final Project: 
Participants will present two to three completely revised and murk-free middle chapters on the last day of the workshop, a revised and annotated plot outline, a plan for finishing their novel, and . . . they will confess their love for writing, each other, and above all, their workshop teacher.

 

Click on the image to find out more . . .


 

Sunday, March 3

The Curse of the Blank Planner

So, not the best poster, am I?

It's the curse of the blank planner pages.

You may ask, what is she talking about?

Some history:

I have kept a planner for as long as I can remember, even in high school, I was the kid that had a planner. Of course, I was also the kid that started working at age 14. I had to keep a planner even if just to keep track of my work schedule.

Fast forward a few years. Okay, already--a LOT of years--and I still have my ever present planner with me at all times.

If you were to scan through the weeks, you will notice that there are times where the weeks are stuffed so full, the writing so small and cramped, that its hard to see a single white space. This would represent a nice normal week for me.

Now, open it up to a blank, very white and unspoiled week. Does that mean I actually had a break? A vacation, maybe? No. These are the weeks that went off the wall, out of the ballpark, or in other words 100% wonky.

To explain further--I was too busy to even record my schedule. My note system during these weeks denigrates to sticky notes and various mini floating squares of the cut-up paper you see at libraries to jot down call #'s.

I've had a lot of empty weeks lately.

This is not to say they are bad. I am one of those people (okay, I admit it, one of those highly caffeinated people), that absolutely THRIVES on chaos and excitement and energy and batting at curve balls and at responding to the next thing that has come around the corner and and  . . .

Like I said, there's kind of been a few of these weeks lately. Lately?! Who am I kidding! Let's be honest, let's talk months.

So what IS the purpose of this post?

I don't really know. Other than to say I've had a lot of posting ideas backing up in my brain and this one was the fastest one to get out of the starting blocks. There is only so long I can hold back the gates. In the near future I hope to release at least of few of the juicier posts soon.
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Examples of some of the items, maybe:

I had a BLAST at LTUE in mid-Feb. I met some incredible people. I want desperately to post some workshop/lecture reviews and comments. But who am I kidding. I have a book deadline!

 
Yes, I have a super real, super crazy few months ahead of me as we put the final touches on the forthcoming, Dressing the Naked Hand: The World's Greatest Guide to Puppets, Puppetry and Puppeteering. Yes, I know it's already available for pre-order on various book sites, but don't go busting your buns to get it--yet. For the sake of making it truly the WORLD'S BEST . . . we are probably not going to release this fall.


This is just a place holder cover-- probably not going to be the final choice)

Oliver is finally coming back out, out of my dusty old files. Yes, I do refer to my books by the main character's first name. In any case, I've been letting Oliver sit for a year. alright, maybe a bit longer than a year. Anyway, Oliver is finding some friends and I am starting to have faith in him once again. I hope that there will be some movement and news with him in the near future.

Philippa is still sitting.

Ditto for Decoration Day and the Afghanistan novel based on the same storyline.

Hana and Denton are struggling--I'm struggling. As much as I obsess over Script and Text analysis, I'm just not sure that I am as much a novelist as I am a picture book writer. I know what needs to happen. Pulling it off is a different story. It calls to me. They keep me up nights with their incessant conversations. And as much as Hana and Denton refuse to shut up and let me sleep nights, I don't know if I can truly write well enough to tell their story. But who said I'm doing it for any other reason than to keep my sanity. It being the writing stuff. I have to write. I can't not write. And, I tell you, these characters aren't about to let me off the hook.

Oh heavens, you let one out and the resulting hole allows so much more to get through!!

Anywho, now there is a NEW one begging for it's story to be told. First line:

I thought the day it rained bodies was the worst day of my life. Now I know better.


Saturday, May 19

Speaking to the Hand

All Hands to the Ready?

For some reason I've been a bit obsessed with hands of late. 

Could it be the upcoming publication of my Puppetry book?

Could it be the recent Puppet Manipulation Workshop we did at the Orem Library?

Could it be a comment I heard by way of A E Cannon about focusing on your character's hands? (#3 on her list of Three Writing or Illustrating Hints)

All of the above?

...no snide comments on me having too much to handle please!

;)

In any case, I found myself in the local Arctic Circle parking lot with my 10 year old, snapping a quick picture of my hand, well, more precisely, The Hand.

The Hand comes with a horrendous Russian accent, knobbly eyes and loads of attitude . . . read more about The Hand at Familius.com read more about The Hand at Familius.com / by clicking here.


Thursday, July 7

Philippa and Oliver. Denton, Cole and Hana

Characters!

Where we are all at, at least for today:

Philippa is currently down to 200 words and is going through some refinements in preparation to send to Disney, Hyperion in another week.

Oliver is spending some quality time at Simon and Schuster (fingers crossed), thanks to Chris and the great people at Shadow Mountain who believe in him enough to recommend him--and his flight plight--to people they know who might take him on.

Denton is a little pissed at Cole for all those spitwad germs of his that are probably worming their way through his lacerated scalp at the moment. It's all for the best that he doesn't have a clue what's in store. There will come a time when a loogie in the hair will seem like good times.

Cole is still getting his laugh on over the whole thing; and it serves Denton right for being dorkwad numero uno and screwing up the upcoming soccer season.

Hana, well, let's just say that Hana is not in a very conversational mood at the moment. Teens, you can't live with them without wanting to kill them. Of course, Hana deserves some special consideration, what with all that she has been through. Still, it does no one any good to go off all angry and half-cocked.

...and as for me . . .

it's hailing here like a son-of-a-b. In July. In freakin' July!